Wednesday, April 8, 2009

Behind the Scenes: A Stranger's Baby

This month marks the release of my third book, A STRANGER'S BABY. In the story, the pregnant heroine finds herself targeted by people who are after her baby, and even with the killers on her trail, it's hard to tell who endured the tougher gestation: the heroine in this book, or me while trying to bring this story to life. ;)

When I wrote my first Intrigue, STRANGERS IN THE NIGHT, I had stories in mind for four additional books. Unfortunately, when I turned to the second of those stories (what was intended to be the third overall), I ran into a few problems. One of the reasons I write romantic suspense is for the emotion, something I hope comes across in my books. Not only do I enjoy writing action, mystery and suspense, I particularly enjoy exploring the emotions of the characters caught up in these life-and-death situations and puzzling mysteries, seeing how they react and how they're affected on a personal level by these events. For me, that's one thing that makes Intrigue so great. In the case of my original story, I had a premise that I loved and a great mystery I had entirely plotted out, right down to identity of the killer. What I didn't have was the emotion. There simply wasn't enough of an emotional investment in the mystery for the main characters, or a deep enough emotional conflict for the romance. Without that, I wasn't excited enough by the story, even with a great premise and plot.

Suddenly I needed a new story that 1) fit what I had in mind for the hero; 2) was different from the other four books; and 3) had a premise that allowed for a title with the word “Stranger” in it. Eventually I had an idea: What if a woman had a one-night stand and became pregnant, something she thought was an accident, only to learn it might not have been an accident at all? I immediately loved the idea, as I thought about what it might mean to this woman to learn her child’s conception might have had something sinister behind it. How would she respond to learning the baby she carried had been fathered by someone who may have been a bad guy? How would those revelations affect her feelings about the baby she’s about to have? Then there was the hero. I thought about what it would be like for a man who's never really known what it is to have a family, who thinks he has no business or interest in getting involved with a woman about to have a baby, to be drawn into the heroine’s mystery. I finally had what I was looking for: a premise with the potential for not just plenty of mystery, but plenty of emotion as well.

Unfortunately, I soon ran into the opposite problem. I had my emotional premise and characters I loved. Now I had to figure out the plot and answers to the questions I'd raised.

I don't know whether it says more about how my mind words or how scary the world can be, but I had no trouble coming up with reasons why someone might have targeted the heroine or why someone would be after her baby. Finding a reason that worked for the story was much more difficult. Some of the reasons I came up with were too dark, some didn’t offer enough story to sustain an entire book, some had too many plot points I couldn’t resolve. As a result, this is a book I wrote and rewrote numerous times, going through multiple versions as I tried to find a solution that I was happy with. Characters were added, then dropped. Entire chapters were written, then rewritten multiple times, or deleted entirely. The motives and explanations behind everything were changed again and again. There were at least three times when I got good distance into the story, stopped and thought "This isn’t working," and scrapped most of it to start over.

Through it all, one thing remained the same: the main characters. These were two people in whom I was greatly invested and whose story I wanted to tell, if only I could figure it out. At times, it certainly seemed as though it would be easier to scrap this idea too and try to come up with yet another one. But my level of investment in these characters kept me determined to bring their story to life.

Finally, though there were many (many) times I thought it would never happen, I came up with a solution and a plot I was satisfied with and was able to finish the book. Of course the only thing that really matters with any book is the finished product, and it will be up to readers to decide whether I succeeded in finding the right plot and satisfactory answers to the mystery. I hope anyone who decides to give the book a try enjoys it, and will be as caught up in the emotion of these characters' story as I was.
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To celebrate its release, I'll give away a copy of the book to one lucky winner. All you have to do to enter is comment on this post sometime today (4/8/09). The winner's name will be posted tomorrow.

15 comments:

  1. Do you always have that hard of a time getting a book written? I am glad you didn't give up on the initial idea and finally found a way to make it work. I would love to decide for myself if you "succeeded in finding the right plot and satisfactory answers to the mystery". So if I don't win a copy I guess I'll have to buy one.

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  2. It's fascinating to see the thought processes behind the story and the inspirations and obstacles you tackled along the way. In the end, however, it sounds like a very interesting plot. Like EllenToo, looks like I'll have to buy a copy if I don't win one.

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  3. Sometimes I don't think readers, (of which I'm one) realize the time and energy that goes into a book, I'm just glad that we have authors like you and others who keep plugging away, making sure that we get the best that's offered. But we do appreciate the effort!! I loved your first two 'Stranger' books and made sure that they are on our library shelves for others.......and keep plugging away Kerry......till you hit that highest of praises, when 1 reader tells another this most elevated of accolades......"You've got to read this!!! It's a good one!!!" *g*

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  4. It sounds like you worked extremely hard to create a great book. Like wstridgerunner said, readers really do appreciate all the time and effort that authors put into creating the books we read. The book sounds very interesting, and I want to read it even more now since I know you worked your butt off to make sure you were happy with the finished product.

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  5. This books sounds like a real winner to me. I am very intrigued by and I will have to have it. Its going on my wish list right now. It sounds like you have a tough time with it but stuck with it and didn't give up! Keep up the good work Kerry!

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  6. Keep up the writing, sounds good!

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  7. Readers do appreciate the effort that goes into a good book.
    A Strangers Baby sounds great!

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  8. Wow! Now I can't wait to start reading it, picked it up today at B&N. Any book that caused that many problems has to be really good by the time you got it done.

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  9. Hi Kerry. Its nice to meet you! I love to read a great romance suspense with the adventure but I so love the emotions that that go through the minds of the hero and heroine. It makes it even more real because then I'm too feeling it along with them.

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  10. If the book is as intriguing as the story behind it, you've got a winner on your hands. I want to read more just from reading your explanation of how the story came to be. Looking forward to it!

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  11. Congrats on the release of your third book. I can't imagine all the work involved in researching and writing a book.

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  12. Thanks for all your comments and your interest in the book, everybody!

    The winner is Virginia. Send me an e-mail with your address and I'll get the book in the mail!

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  13. WooHoo! Thanks you so much Kerry!!! I just sent in my info!

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  14. Kerry, thanks for letting me know published authors have it rough too. :) I'm really looking forward to getting my hands on your next book.

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